http://www.mypdfscripts.com/scriptreviews/kevin-jackson-reviews-the-girl-with-the-red-riding-hood The way scripts should be.* Thu, 09 Sep 2010 06:56:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc http://www.mypdfscripts.com/scriptreviews/kevin-jackson-reviews-the-girl-with-the-red-riding-hood/comment-page-1#comment-787 Filming details for “Red Riding Hood” « jeremyirons.net Tue, 22 Jun 2010 23:19:00 +0000 http://www.mypdfscripts.com/?p=3357#comment-787 [...] Check out a review of the revised first draft of the script for “The Girl with the Red Riding ... [...] [...] Check out a review of the revised first draft of the script for “The Girl with the Red Riding … [...]

]]> http://www.mypdfscripts.com/scriptreviews/kevin-jackson-reviews-the-girl-with-the-red-riding-hood/comment-page-1#comment-255 ericand Tue, 22 Dec 2009 23:10:43 +0000 http://www.mypdfscripts.com/?p=3357#comment-255 Kevin -- to make these reviews helpful to those of us looking to learn more about the craft of writing screenplays, I wish you would spend more time providing specifics (examples) of what you liked and didn't like about this script and less time playing studio or development exec. For instance, when you say the inciting incident and midpoints come in 10 pages too late, perhaps you can identify what each of them are and on what page each appears. From there, you can explain what the happens when these happen too late -- makes the act 2 or act 3 too long, etc. Kevin — to make these reviews helpful to those of us looking to learn more about the craft of writing screenplays, I wish you would spend more time providing specifics (examples) of what you liked and didn't like about this script and less time playing studio or development exec. For instance, when you say the inciting incident and midpoints come in 10 pages too late, perhaps you can identify what each of them are and on what page each appears. From there, you can explain what the happens when these happen too late — makes the act 2 or act 3 too long, etc.

]]> http://www.mypdfscripts.com/scriptreviews/kevin-jackson-reviews-the-girl-with-the-red-riding-hood/comment-page-1#comment-180 ericand Tue, 22 Dec 2009 18:10:43 +0000 http://www.mypdfscripts.com/?p=3357#comment-180 Kevin -- to make these reviews helpful to those of us looking to learn more about the craft of writing screenplays, I wish you would spend more time providing specifics (examples) of what you liked and didn't like about this script and less time playing studio or development exec. For instance, when you say the inciting incident and midpoints come in 10 pages too late, perhaps you can identify what each of them are and on what page each appears. From there, you can explain what the happens when these happen too late -- makes the act 2 or act 3 too long, etc. Kevin — to make these reviews helpful to those of us looking to learn more about the craft of writing screenplays, I wish you would spend more time providing specifics (examples) of what you liked and didn't like about this script and less time playing studio or development exec. For instance, when you say the inciting incident and midpoints come in 10 pages too late, perhaps you can identify what each of them are and on what page each appears. From there, you can explain what the happens when these happen too late — makes the act 2 or act 3 too long, etc.

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